For my second pitch I had some good feedback, I was told I should work on some hand movements and maybe work on some pauses to sound more fluid. So for this elevator pitch I tried to move my hands around a little, to be honest I have no idea what to do with my hand, but I gave it a try. I also tried to add a little time in between sentences this go around. I just need to practice, practice, practice.
I LOVE the way that you included statistics in your presentation and actually showed the product in the video. If I was in front of you, I would want to see the actual product and I would be able to do that. The only thing I would say is to use a little more enthusiasm. You have a GREAT product so talk about it that way. GREAT pitch overall! http://abraham-khalil.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
I LOVE the way that you included statistics in your presentation and actually showed the product in the video. If I was in front of you, I would want to see the actual product and I would be able to do that. The only thing I would say is to use a little more enthusiasm. You have a GREAT product so talk about it that way. GREAT pitch overall! http://abraham-khalil.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
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